I think I worked moderately today, I continued my editing process and by the day I am finding it harder and harder to cut out the words as I am starting to figure out how I can still cut roughly 400 words and still keep the vital information in my essay. I had asked Mr.Sparks to show me a few ways to cut out words and still keep the information, and it did prove to help a little. He shown me a way to cut out the "did not"s into "didn't"s, "can not"s into "can't"s and some other ways to make sentances smaller and eventually cut out a lot of words. I am hoping that by the end of the project I will be able to have a excellent essay and be able to keep it within the limit.
I think there is lots of improvment needed, as I can make sure I can observe my essay carefully and be as miserly with my words as I can.
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